Started to get into the story around the 80page mark. Before I could not, for the life of me understand how I was suppose to care about Ashley. If I didn't care about her than I didn't care about the story. But, with the introduction of Hopper the story feels as if it is flowing more, going somewhere, not dry and dense. it feels like it's easier to read and more enjoyable, like the author stop trying so hard.
— Jan 15, 2019 07:39PM
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