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Didn’t stay as good…not very convincing story…not a lot of relationship development

3 chapters in and I’m loving it 🥰

Well, it’s quite boring.

Boring and I’m so not into the “it’s only a fling” topic.

A little bit boring. Nice, but boring. And repetitive, since the timeline is the danger in alle the books.

3 pages in and the writing style is do stilted.

So much monologuing, it’s exhausting!

The kittens arrive. I’m getting strong “look at that big alpha male with a baby in his arms, so cute vibes.”

I don’t like it. I want to read gay romance, not some “female gaze” love story. Where everybody pretends one MC is male but the story is a cliche in heterosexuality.

I really don’t like the lactation kink and the storyline develops too fast with no real insight into the characters.

How often can you write structural? Oh, and architectural, for that matter.

There are no bridges between the chapters at all and I find myself confused whenever starting a new one.

50% in and I still don’t know WHY they can’t be open about their relationship? Or being gay or whatever?

Not one sentence explains it and I have to assume.

In the first chapter, he drives a red Ferrari, in the second chapter a black Porsche…?

The adjectives used in the sex scenes are weirdly verbale related (folds, wet).

The description of the first sex scene changes between using condoms, not using condoms, mixing up round one and two.

Weird and maybe AI?

Hm, not as good as I remember.

😳 a family who protects a man who lies, steals and assaults women sexually and is all around a big piece of shit so their sister can marry this man she‘s so in love with him? Huh?

Please author, THINK before you start a plottwist you have no good reason to construct.

Wow, Owen is…a lot. Very dub-con and I’m not sure I like it.

It’s all a bit much. Not enough explaining and the world is too complex for that.

Sadly, Percy is not very likeable when interacting with the elves (and very different than he was within his family!) he behaves very arrogantly, especially for someone who didn’t acknowledge his mage powers before.

The number of wrong words is disgusting and irritating.

Funny, still laughing.

It started so good - until it wasn’t.

No explaining of the backstory, the story itself just sits there without any connection.

Eddie only speaks with exclamation ❗️ points. Exhausting. Golden Labradoodle overload 😳

Soooo much info dump. 😳

Almost at the end, when they talking about money (Austin had no job), the Doc says “but you earned your money last night, didn’t you

It was meant to be a joke, but 🤮🤢🤮

No show only tell. And what utter nonsense 😏

What is it with the boring books 🥱

Picked it up again. Very problematic in the current politic environment. Very instinct and hierarchy driven.

As always not happy with how fast novellas progress.

Uh, the “package” incident is stupid, Liam is stupid.

Very, very, very unappealing cover art.

Picked up again after a pause.