Ch 18. The opening chapters nearly put me off, initial tone felt very YA in an unappealing way with irrelevant side characters chatting about badgers. Lots of tell don’t show for the Briar/Seb friendship backstory. Main cast was introduced in a way that made many forgettable. I can only really remember Briar, Seb, Watson and vaguely the guy who got shot. But the story is really picking up now so I’ll read more
— Sep 20, 2026 05:16PM
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