Breeeeee > Recent Status Updates

So I get to the point where they meet an immortal, and something is mentioned about night being dangerous, greedy ppl drinking magic turn into beasts, yada yada. Why not even a chapter or two later they come across another immortal and the night thing is mentioned again & fmc basically says “so I guess the night is dangerous.. I wonder why”
??? We already found out why?? Editing needs to do a better job

Seems pretty interesting so far. I like the voice actor. He’s funny

Wtfffffffff this already has me like 👀🫢

Wait, the weirdness of the first half of the book was explained lol it’s better now but wow I don’t think I should have to read 60% of a romance book before it gets good & romancey.

“This has got to be our most pleasant interaction to date, even if he’s mostly unconscious.” Supposed romance but it’s giving creepy?? MMC hasn’t shown any instances of being attracted to FMC yet that I’ve seen but FMC is tripping over him talking about wanting to touch his face and thinking about his body. Hope he starts actually showing he likes her soon bc I want to DNF so bad rn but it’s so short.

This book is kind of cringy so far 😭 I hope it gets better but damn is the fmc insufferable so far.