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soo helpful

love the writing style so far

Yeah, middle was good!

Why is every story as if it gets cut off in the middle or at the climax. Like. Where’s the rest of it. Something important happened moments before the story ends. I feel like short stories don’t normally go like that

I mean this third story is so confusing… realms… creature… organizations that are unclear.. also new york in 1897… like wth is going on

I like this story better, but the god damn romance is creeping back in again…

why does this read like the first to die at the end… what’s with the romance….

Sleepy

Why is every character better than Cyrus