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This book is primarily useless whiny dialogue… and doesn’t even have the decency to have actual descriptive spice. Like it teases it then just skips ahead. wtf even is that?! The pacing is bad as it is….. but?!?

Honestly everything feels like you’re constantly in -cut scene- on to the next scene the whole time. Like everything feels pointless because it feels like you’re rushing through it.

“Dedication: For anyone who has ever felt the need to hide a part of their true self: you and all your pieces are what make you, you, and your people will accept every single messy, chaotic, imperfect part.”
Dang girl. Startin right off in the feels.

This girls ability to walk into traps is unmatched.

This book has so many inconsistencies you would think AI wrote it. Good lord. We went from the hike stopped because this pat guy was looking at a map and she was gonna put more bug spray on, to suddenly there’s already a tent set up before Cole even gets there??

This girl has the life preservation skills of a moth. I get that she was sheltered but how do you live through the apocalypse & learn NOTHING?! It’s not the fact that she wants to get captured. I get her line of thinking. It’s the, I’ll wear a dress & for a go bag she chooses another dress & a book but not her flashlight & a second pair of underwear is a last minute after thought?! *deep breaths*