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Why does the book keep changing from 3rd person to 1st person? It’s very confusing and doesn’t add anything to the experience of the book. If anything it takes away. Also, this author seems to often forget where the characters are and what objects they have around each other. It’s very confusing to read.

Nope. I got 10 pages in and could finish. This story is only 30 pages and I still couldn’t do it. I love smut but this is in the second person asked the characters descriptions didn’t do it for me.

This story needs content warnings. Not just a cultural disclosure.

I stopped reading this book. I just wasn’t enjoying the story. I felt like there was so much detail that the reader could have inferred that would be plainly stated. It also made me feel like the writer didn’t trust me to pick up the clues they gave. Also I got a decent way into the story and just didn’t feel like I liked the characters or the world that was being built.