DNF @ Ch. 8
One conversation dragged across eight chapters. The dialogue makes zero sense—idioms, monologues, and insta-lust with no chemistry. The FMC begs a stranger to sleep with her, but it’s not sexy, just awkward. Nothing felt natural. I couldn’t keep going.
8 chapters, 1 convo, no vibes.
— Apr 02, 2025 09:10AM
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