So far I’m enjoying this. The characters are pretty great. The story is compelling. Small town, loads of drama and impending doom. Awesome.
But the writing is at times hard to connect to. This example here:
“Doesn’t matter how much I want to drown in your taste. How much I want to know what it would be like to sink into that sweet heat.”
NO ONE TALKS LIKE THIS, ANSON!!!
So cheesy 😣😂
— Jan 02, 2026 12:32AM
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