“His voice was thick and furry”
“…calling out bids and bullshit.”
This is good but Chen’s writing quirks are a bit sus sometimes. The number of times a person’s voice is described as “thick” in this book is a lot. There are some shifts in narrative voice that don’t make sense in the greater context of the rest of the narration. And lots of double-adjectives— “___ and ____”
Done soon 🤞
— Feb 07, 2026 08:08AM
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