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This book is taking over my life!

I was looking for the same consistency as the first one, but it’s not here. The editing needed another once over and I’m not sure if there are plot mistakes or if I’m just missing something.

Omg, I am eating this book for dinner! *chef’s kiss*

This woman has the EQ of s snail. “How did things come to this?” I don’t know, woman… maybe it was because you said some really atrocious things. Maybe that’s how it came to this.

This was not the third act twist I was expecting.

The formatting and style are giving “FanFiction.net but we never evolved to write professionally,” but the tone, pacing, and vibes are there.

This book is really good, but I think it would have been funnier if written in the third person. I think getting insight into each characters thoughts in the moment would have been great instead of occasionally having to get them in the next chapter or so. But this is in no way a dealbreaker. Still super funny and steamy.

Second book better than the first…? I really love the plot of this story and now that there isn’t as much sex to clutter it (a sentence I NEVER thought I would say) it finally has room to breathe.

Just finished the first book. It was a LOT of sex, some of which I had to skim over. But it’s a good lesson that there is a balance to this stuff.

These three give me anxiety. There’s a huge power play between them, which I know is the point, so I’m willing to keep going, but god is it a lot.

I am so confused by the setting. What do the Danes and Saxons have to do with Ocracoke island in America?? They’re nearly a century apart from being relevant to the other.

If “just talk to her” was a person, it would be Kasten. 😂😂

I love these two damaged imbeciles. I can’t wait for them to have an actual conversation.

Meh. Very strong start, but half way through it drops. It’s written in 3rd omniscient, which is fine, but it’s not consistent. It’ll change to 3rd-limited on a dime and jump perspectives within paragraphs. The first “fight” scene spends half the reading time talking about two characters who were never introduced and remembering past fights and facts about them.

It’s just messy and needed a re-edit.