At 20% I was having fun and getting into and 30-some% in I'm getting a little annoyed at the modern everyday colloquialisms and phrases being used. "sports bra" "dimples" electricity powered by magic instead of. . .electricity? It's like it's contemporary, steampunk, and fantasy all at once. Which it can be. But, it's pulling me out of the story.
— Mar 26, 2026 11:42AM
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