I’m not sure how I feel about the 3rd person… I’ve read 3rd person before but this one keeps repeating their names OVER AND OVER again like bro I won’t forget I promise. Throw some “she did this” and “he did that” in there not just “Jeanie Jeanie Jeanie” and “Logan Logan Logan”
Anyways
— May 10, 2026 12:00AM
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