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The stories’ concepts are interesting but I prefer stories more spelled out to understand the true meaning. The interest of the actual story is not there for me

I find the stories to be serviceable, but can use more creativity to the twist of the stories to drive home the point of each story more. My thoughts are, if you’re going to make up a world rule, then why not make it as absurd as possible, as long as it fits your narrative.

The funeral is turning out to be interesting with little cutaway.

The three chapters about Penelope’s, Eve’s, and Ward’s backgrounds should’ve been earlier in the book instead of close to the end and not back to back chapters.