the dialogue is so fucking cringe. why is the narration so well written but the characters are speaking in gangsta? not mob gangster speaking, either. just aave 😭 i’m just confused??? make it cohesive???? if we’re gonna speak in aave, narrate in aave 💔 “mu’fuckas” and “hos” in a book dialogue is just cringe!!!!
— Nov 06, 2025 08:17AM
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