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Academical tone - love it
Is Stoker already obscuring him??
Is the professor been in a relationship with Lennox (referring to being in Elsbeths position an felt abused, sneering about improper relations to Lennox and why he rushed to max in the hospital: is he his son?!) A bit ieuw as Max is the same age aproximately as Ellsbeth

Basically the school girl falls for teacher but with twists and a sauce of arcane magic

Strong start. I love the wittiness between the main characters and how she keeps throwong his balance off. Language wise it is spot on academic and the setting is well described up till now.

As a teacher I must say I stumble over the fast progression of letting go of rules and legallity. The credibility suffers a little from it.

Raker ... 💀🖤

Aster is a Potterhead for sure...

Raker is ugh.
Storyline devellopment kinda slow... some arc needs to kick up and shock this back to life. The return of the silver dragon would be cool. Poisoning Raker. Cadic loosing his head... the men die or are total asses in this story.

"Everyone deserves a chance to die a brutal death."
I like Zane. Zane is cool.
Wicked reference not gone unnoticed. 😂

Trial 3: chef's kiss

The kiss was confusing, along with the feelings Fi is experiencing it... The romance part of the story feels as an afterthought, sometimes added to make it a romantasy but feels (up til.now) unnecessary.

The Hunters: it feels like crescent city III.
We have humans, lesser & high fae, gods and their champions. Dragons came along from elsewhere... it feels a bit much. The trope to stop war would've ben enough?

I like the political intrigue, the secrets (you just know there will be plottwists!! ). The worldbuilding is tad bit heavy handed, But I can manage. The roeturing scene was... gruesome!

Like the fmc Aurelia: not too young, layered, curvy, has standards.
Like Josh though haven't seen much of him yet apart from looks (tall, blond, muscular, good looking) and he can behave like a gentleman on a date.

First 3 chapters done, let's go!

The vibes are vibing! I forsee trouble on the horizon. I love how Conor is fighting himself ♡♡♡

Oh Brynn, that d arkhaired soldier just seems too yummy to pass by. (And Kai a but of the coercing type...)