eriberri > Recent Status Updates

okay no cause now i’m irritated. he literally spent the first 75% of the book reminding her that it’s casual that he doesn’t want to date her and he’s only interested in a hookup… then he just BLURTS out he loves her?? after they’ve both been on the same page about it being casual for WEEKS… and now he’s mad that she’s not professing her love back to him?? weird.

okay so he literally was mad at her for showing up unannounced to a family emergency because he felt they weren’t serious enough and he didn’t want her to meet his family… then 2 pages later he jumps out of bed and confesses that he’s in love with her? uh i guess.

i was under the impression that this was a romance? it appears i was sorely mistaken.

actively falling asleep while reading this. so boring.

… i am literally sobbing uncontrollably. i can barely type this.

i promise if what i THINK is going to happen happens this book is getting a ONE

he loves your kids. he loves YOU. he built you a HOUSE!!!! HE ADOPTED YOUR KIDS SO THEY CAN RECEIVE HEALTH INSURANCE… HELLOOOOOOO WHY IS IT TAKING SO LONG FOR YOU TO TAKE HIM BACK? he said he’s sorry. like.

case and point, one of kids got into a fight protecting his sister and received detention… need i remind you that they are FIVE AND IN KINDERGARTEN???

i feel like Yarros should have just aged the kids up cause five and six year olds do now talk or act like this.

i have literal tears in my eyes

“you’re the only thing on earth i want to run to. i can’t run from you — you’re part of me”

MAN LIKE MALAKAI KOREDE

of COURSE Malakai would be in the neighboring villa 🙄

again. i just read a TWENTY THREE PAGE CHAPTER to reveal something that was obvious about 4 pages in. like im interested in the characters and everything and the story’s not half bad but it is soooooooooo over done. everything doesn’t need to be explained down to the finest micro detail. like.

Malakai brought guns to a knife fight.

ngl this feel more overwritten than the last book. it took 40 pages to get to the point that she’s in loveless relationship with man who has the personality of a hard boiled egg.