Some of the language is a little on the head, does a lot of telling rather than showing, spoon feeding the reader when itās pretty obvious whatās happening or how the characters are feeling. and it is dragging little in the middle.
I feel like Iāve likely guessed the twist.
BUT overall Iām enjoying this. Itās 101 from the genre. Sometimes exactly what you want from a fantasy book.
— Jul 27, 2025 04:29AM
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