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“From my many grandmothers I learned how I came from a circle of courageous women and strong men who had walls pulled down straight in front of them until the circle closed, the way rabbits are hunted in a narrowing circle, but some lived, some survived in this narrowing circle of life.” - Linda Hogan, Solar Storms, Pg. 107

The words are extremely vivid.

The dialogue is so stilted and long holy moly. It doesn’t feel natural at all. It feels like nothing has happened and that the main character is kind of annoying.