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why did we get this pregnancy-thing?

Besides everything that is fucked up until now, you just go and wipe her mind because you don't want to deal with being and asshole and her still being attracted to you. Congrats, for once we have true morally grey. Not sure I want to go on.

getting confused about time passed. At some points, it sounds like several days have passed, than again it's just one week.
And she just found out she has magic and is new to this world, yet she knows about werewolves in this world.

Let me get this straight. He can't go to hell because he was able to forgive her. But he believes his "dad", that the found her laughing over the dead body of his brother. He knows her self hate issues. And he instantly hates her enough to now be able to go to hell? Not seeing much real forgiveness here.

Sexuality has nothing to do with genetics!

breeding-trope. urg

still: sex is the plot. Maybe the solution? Not sure about that anymore as more sex seems to be needed yet it is not said if it is works now.
But throw in some duel to clarify if someone is innocent.
And yes, I get you are emotionally etc. 16 or 17. But this innocent, wide-eyed dumb fmc is grating on my nerves. Don't know if I am going to finish this.

When did it become an optional thing actually to proofread your book? There are so many missing words that just make me pause while reading.

that chemistry is hot!
and the plot twists so good.

The ideas are not bad but the book looks like a maybe third draft without anyone proofreading it. Passages feel inserted at the wrong place in the timeline, whole paragraphs are almost identical, spelling issues, wrong names and pronouns and words missing.

great chemistry between the main characters.
Overall it's a Hades x Persephone which borrows a lot from greek mythology but not completely. I am not quite sure I like this almost but not quite world-building as you start assuming one thing and then learn it is different.