This book started well, but it’s getting very repetitive at 41%. There are serious timeline errors. Ivan looking for Jay for 7 years, but he’s only 16…should be 4 years. The whole fight to meet up situation is completely messed up, and weekends suddenly have 3 days. This book is over 500 pages, not sure where we are going from here.
— May 11, 2026 07:31PM
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