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noo please take me back to victorian england

My issue with this is that i feel that it's poorly organized. i agree with all the sentiments, sure, but the author jumps around in time and subject matter. The content of each chapter seems arbitrarily grouped together. Like semi connected paragraphs and statements. Lots of little statements, there is no building to a point

dragged through the introduction written by the, which needed another round of edits for grammar (specifically commas) and content. not sure who wrote it but was not k

Idk how to explain it but the mormonism is really shining through in this one. complex magic system but simplistic interpersonal relationships - simplistic to the point of absurdity