Ashly Shaw > Recent Status Updates

This series is starting to make me feel like I’m dragging myself through mud.

I have now joined the “We hate Vincent” as well as the “I am very disappointed in Roccurem” clubs.

Too many mentions of characters “placing their hands on their hips” or the FMC or MMC saying “I place my hands on my hips.”
Other than that this series is still great so far. I just need (am begging for) some variation in sassy stances. 😅

Literally my only complaint is that I still wish this book was edited a bit more, simply for grammatical/sentence structure reasons. This was initially independently published and it’s her debut so I’m hoping that gets better with the rest, as it seems to be getting better as this book progresses.
There’s so much potential here and I’m borderline obsessed with the FMC and MMC. 😅

The pinkie promise in chapter 24 🥲
My only complaint about this so far is that I wish it was edited a bit more. The plot is fucking phenomenal and I love the characters sooo much so far.
Other than occasional grammatical errors and weird sentence structure it really is great. Just a bit obvious at times that it was her debut.

If Gabby gets hurt I might riot…😅