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Ashly Shaw
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The pinkie promise in chapter 24 🥲
My only complaint about this so far is that I wish it was edited a bit more. The plot is fucking phenomenal and I love the characters sooo much so far.
Other than occasional grammatical errors and weird sentence structure it really is great. Just a bit obvious at times that it was her debut.
— May 15, 2026 04:30PM
My only complaint about this so far is that I wish it was edited a bit more. The plot is fucking phenomenal and I love the characters sooo much so far.
Other than occasional grammatical errors and weird sentence structure it really is great. Just a bit obvious at times that it was her debut.
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Ashly Shaw
is on page 431 of 572
Literally my only complaint is that I still wish this book was edited a bit more, simply for grammatical/sentence structure reasons. This was initially independently published and it’s her debut so I’m hoping that gets better with the rest, as it seems to be getting better as this book progresses.
There’s so much potential here and I’m borderline obsessed with the FMC and MMC. 😅
— May 19, 2026 02:39PM
There’s so much potential here and I’m borderline obsessed with the FMC and MMC. 😅