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Rosie is on page 69 of 427 of Scarlet Morning (Scarlet Morning, #1)
“…must be grand”
— Oct 08, 2025 11:00AM 1 comment
Scarlet Morning (Scarlet Morning, #1)

Rosie
Rosie is on page 57 of 427 of Scarlet Morning (Scarlet Morning, #1)
Sentences “The children […] could see nothing in the dark. Then, suddenly, they could.” are a little awkward to read
— Oct 08, 2025 08:55AM Add a comment
Scarlet Morning (Scarlet Morning, #1)

Rosie
Rosie is on page 24 of 427 of Scarlet Morning (Scarlet Morning, #1)
- "says" and "said" are repetitive, otherwise good
— Oct 08, 2025 05:30AM Add a comment
Scarlet Morning (Scarlet Morning, #1)

Rosie
Rosie is on page 12 of 427 of Scarlet Morning (Scarlet Morning, #1)
- "Says" is used instead of "asks"
- Reveal of the story being real is kind of abrupt?
— Oct 07, 2025 11:02AM Add a comment
Scarlet Morning (Scarlet Morning, #1)

Rosie
Rosie is on page 163 of 480 of The Deep Dark
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The Deep Dark

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