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- "Says" is used instead of "asks"
- Reveal of the story being real is kind of abrupt?
— Oct 07, 2025 11:02AM
- Reveal of the story being real is kind of abrupt?
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Sentences “The children […] could see nothing in the dark. Then, suddenly, they could.” are a little awkward to read
— Oct 08, 2025 08:55AM
