the humor and metaphor kept pulling me out of the story, partially bc it’s just not my sense of humor and partially bc it would make metaphors that would reference the actual world, rather than keeping it consistent with the fantasy world. It started to not make sense of what time period or referent point the narrative was told in. Also was too heavy handed/didactic w/ moral messages.
— Mar 08, 2026 09:23AM
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