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No the dialogue doesn't not sound realistic. It sounds like something that would only happen in a book. One of the purposes of the dialogue is to create tension between the painter guy and Salem.

One of my conflicts is Character vs Self. An example of this would be Salem being frustrated with her self for not approaching a guy,

I am at a level 2, mostly because I'm at a point in the story where it's slightly confusing.

My book takes place at Salems college, but there is no time period in the book so far.

Since the author has emphasized Salem's lack of family members, I think one of them is going to pass soon. Salem also just got an important call from her mom about her dad, so I predict that Salem's dad is dead or is going to die.

"Step back" RuNyx (23)

"I got curious" Salem is always getting curious, and that is the main cause of her problems.

It takes place at Salem's college (Mortimer) but there is no year mentioned.

Olivia is the supporting character, she is Salem's older sister.

I read 8 pages today.

The genre of my book is dark romance.

I like Salem because she is bold.

An adjective I found was haphazard, and I found it on page 21.

I read 5 pages.

Salem is my favorite character because of how curious but smart she is. She seems like the odd one out in a family of very pretentious people.

read yesterday (5/20) but forgot to update goodreads