tayson’s Reviews > Enigma > Status Update

No the dialogue doesn't not sound realistic. It sounds like something that would only happen in a book. One of the purposes of the dialogue is to create tension between the painter guy and Salem.

One of my conflicts is Character vs Self. An example of this would be Salem being frustrated with her self for not approaching a guy,

I am at a level 2, mostly because I'm at a point in the story where it's slightly confusing.

My book takes place at Salems college, but there is no time period in the book so far.