Heidi Marle > Recent Status Updates

Having no quotation marks around the dialogue is pissing me off!!!! And every single time someone says something, the author just uses the word “said” or “says.” Soooooo borrriiinnngggg!!!! But the rest of the writing is solid so far.

Harper is stupid af and it’s pissing me off. Like grow tf up.

The story is getting better, thank god! The way she writes action scenes is much better than the large spans of inner monologue.

The UK writing system is low-key annoying…and the characters and writing are kind of flat, but it’s not bad enough for me to stop reading.