Jamie Williamson > Recent Status Updates

Took me a good hundred pages to fall into the groove of the story, but I’m enjoying it. Not exactly sure how I feel about the writing style, so far a lot of things have been covered several times, mainly characters’ emotions and feelings.

The look into Cyrus' psyche in his dreams and in his experiences with Zee and Orkideh are so good -- can't wait to see how this goes in the next section, which feels like the very start of the third act.

Some great quotes in the first few pages: “A chicken hadn’t shot his wife out of the sky.”



“Cyrus wanted to kick him in the face. For being racist. For being a little right.”

Super interesting start, excited to see where this goes.

I’m hooked.