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I like the way the technical language is real. It's repetitive in the right way and doesn't read the way actors sound when they say words they don't understand.

The self-reflection is growing on me.
It's very interesting that Ryan just immediately knows he's in a trap but understands that he doesn't have options.

I'm not sure how I feel about the asides. "I didn't read the contact. I should have read it" that kind of thing. I can't decide whether I like it or not.

This book is so much fun!

Drew just mentioned the smell of the Kincaid brothers in a very natural way. It wasn't "his smell of vanilla and grapefruit" but, rather, "their soap or aftershave or deodorant" which is much more realistic to my mind.

Okay, Adam is definitely in the running for my new favorite book boyfriend. The direct way he talks to Drew is perfect!