Ch4os’s Reviews > Fractured Ground : The Ryan Kane Series Book Two > Status Update
Ch4os
is 74% done
I like the way the technical language is real. It's repetitive in the right way and doesn't read the way actors sound when they say words they don't understand.
— Sep 12, 2026 04:49AM
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Ch4os
is 10% done
The self-reflection is growing on me.
It's very interesting that Ryan just immediately knows he's in a trap but understands that he doesn't have options.
— Sep 09, 2026 03:54PM
It's very interesting that Ryan just immediately knows he's in a trap but understands that he doesn't have options.
Ch4os
is 7% done
I'm not sure how I feel about the asides. "I didn't read the contact. I should have read it" that kind of thing. I can't decide whether I like it or not.
— Sep 07, 2026 07:50PM