Status Updates From Fractured Ground : The Ryan...

I like the way the technical language is real. It's repetitive in the right way and doesn't read the way actors sound when they say words they don't understand.

The self-reflection is growing on me.
It's very interesting that Ryan just immediately knows he's in a trap but understands that he doesn't have options.

I'm not sure how I feel about the asides. "I didn't read the contact. I should have read it" that kind of thing. I can't decide whether I like it or not.