This is a fun read so far, enough action to keep the plot moving forward.
Writer like's to describe things as "like X - but wrong".
Also the "world splits apart" or "the world shifted" is used a lot.
A little too much modern dialogue for my taste, but I can get past it.
Does he have to constantly say "Starling" in every sentence he speaks to Thais? This is so weird lol
— Dec 30, 2025 08:53AM
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