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Plot is good and it’s creative but the banter would be stronger if we weren’t told when things were funny and it was left to stand on its own.

It’s a good story. I personally don’t like when the tension vanishes out of a relationship because a bond is accepted. I also don’t enjoy the overly lovey-dovey repetitive, I’m so obsessed with you all the time trope. But if you do, you will love this.