It’s written semi-badly, I fear the editor didn’t do their job well as there are parts that rebutt others, (Mother isn’t one for tears; a few pages later, her eyes were wet with tears), (Me and the girls were at etiquette lessons; a few pages later, It’s the first etiquette lesson today), and quite a bit more. The story’s idea was smart, but the execution was less than decent. Still continuing though.
— Aug 09, 2026 11:07AM
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