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cranky*

Wow. You can totally tell a man wrote this. I'm not being mean, I just can't take these characters seriously. The dialogue used is choppy & forced. The heroine constantly trying not to piss her pants when she sees a guy shirtless, or is rendered 'speechless' is so annoying. I gotta shelve this one for when I'm not cranmy & tired. ugh.

Oy vey! Grammar errors, I can deal w/ but the writing style is so juvenile & doesn't make sense. The H is supposed to be 24 but speaks & acts like a preteen. I HATE to mark it a DNF, but what should be a plotline is all over the place. I also don't know anything of substance about the characters at this point b/c of terrible development. I also can't fathom why this book is $3.99

Ugh. I was excited about this story, but I just couldn't get into it. I tried picking it back up, but I felt nada. I HATE to have DNF's, so I'm setting it back aside for now. Possibly forever :/