Ashlea’s Reviews > Enslaved by the Ocean > Status Update

Oy vey! Grammar errors, I can deal w/ but the writing style is so juvenile & doesn't make sense. The H is supposed to be 24 but speaks & acts like a preteen. I HATE to mark it a DNF, but what should be a plotline is all over the place. I also don't know anything of substance about the characters at this point b/c of terrible development. I also can't fathom why this book is $3.99