Noticed multiple instances (2 so far) of where the author repeats themselves about the same thing very shortly after just saying the same thing.
The cleaning the bathroom with the caked on toothpaste - the “oh I can’t tell her I got evicted, oh yea so I can’t tell her I got evicted” like you just said that, why describe it right after just describing it. This writing is losing me - how was that overlooked?
— Apr 03, 2026 08:06PM
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