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im struggling a little. it’s a bit stiff and feels like i’m watching something with bad acting

wow. so much fun

already enjoying this

just dropping my notes

- this woman is at least 48. the writing of the character seems to be a bit lacking. i’m not sure if it’s because she’s finding herself or not but there’s too much naivety written into the character. also not a lot written about her old life and the cancer she overcame. she’s also not descriptive of others but somehow manages to for the man that’s obviously her romantic interest

this started so well what a refreshing way to start a story.

it’s quite interesting but i’m struggling a bit.