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is 57% done
just dropping my notes
- this woman is at least 48. the writing of the character seems to be a bit lacking. i’m not sure if it’s because she’s finding herself or not but there’s too much naivety written into the character. also not a lot written about her old life and the cancer she overcame. she’s also not descriptive of others but somehow manages to for the man that’s obviously her romantic interest
— Jun 02, 2026 10:36AM
- this woman is at least 48. the writing of the character seems to be a bit lacking. i’m not sure if it’s because she’s finding herself or not but there’s too much naivety written into the character. also not a lot written about her old life and the cancer she overcame. she’s also not descriptive of others but somehow manages to for the man that’s obviously her romantic interest
