right OKAY. it’s improved from my last review but still ong it’s so confusing. like i get it’s the plot but js get on with it!! and it switches from past to present and it’s all confusing and the chapters aren’t equal length. one will be 4 pages and it’ll be so interesting then DONE. and one boringggg chapter with like 15/20 pages. plz get better
— Aug 06, 2026 10:40AM
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