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So far I’m a fan. There’s a lot of dialogue and most of the book is conversation but it’s not boring. I can already feel the development of the story and a driving motive from just the first couple chapters.

Decided to finish the book cuz I saw a TikTok that said you can’t honestly rate something if you didn’t finish it so I’m going to be suffering through 400 more pages. The story had a little break from the sex so that’s chill and it seems to be forming an actual straight line with the plot. I sincerely hope it stays this way for the rest of the book.

The story seems lost and I’m only twelve chapters in. Every chapter so far has had some form of sexual scene that feels completely unrelated and unnecessary for the plot.

The pacing feels off compared to the first two books