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Jonathan Dix
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The story seems lost and I’m only twelve chapters in. Every chapter so far has had some form of sexual scene that feels completely unrelated and unnecessary for the plot.
— Jul 20, 2026 06:27PM
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Jonathan Dix
is on page 160 of 544
Decided to finish the book cuz I saw a TikTok that said you can’t honestly rate something if you didn’t finish it so I’m going to be suffering through 400 more pages. The story had a little break from the sex so that’s chill and it seems to be forming an actual straight line with the plot. I sincerely hope it stays this way for the rest of the book.
— Aug 14, 2026 06:11AM