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A lot of this is so obvious its painful. The main character can be somewhat smart and then sooo dumb.

Im enjoying it more than I thought. It gets better. The ceridwin is interesting enough

The writing is a little bit bad. I like the storyline. The author makes it annoyingly evident that the Mc is smart. Some dialogue and scenes are a small bit confusing. A little repetitive. But so far decent.

Faster paced than I expected. I thought it'd be more dull. Im already sad because I know what happens. Love the writing style and the fact that im learning about Afghanistan.

Fml - decent personality - feels stupid
ml -frog, who is obviously riven
She looks stupid for not realizing this
Merrek and Myrrdin - mixed up so many times
world building - confusing
Good making us hate the villain. Kinda to much-textbook obsessively crazy
Frog - no character depth besides one flashback
Love his journal entries
Good vocab
Confusing scene writing
See the vision- world building - not there yet