Elise’s Reviews > Not Another Happily Ever After > Status Update

Fml - decent personality - feels stupid
ml -frog, who is obviously riven
She looks stupid for not realizing this
Merrek and Myrrdin - mixed up so many times
world building - confusing
Good making us hate the villain. Kinda to much-textbook obsessively crazy
Frog - no character depth besides one flashback
Love his journal entries
Good vocab
Confusing scene writing
See the vision- world building - not there yet