Syndell Layton > Recent Status Updates

Ha had a stroke did ya? Good.

Does no one else realize that is her daughter! Duh!

God dammit! It's TRAITORS, not traders! So fucking irritating. Why is it that the See series has none of these issues but Insight is full of them. About to be over this shot for rel.

Omg, this is getting sooooo boring...

Yup I called it

Now I'm kinda getting annoyed this section feels way to much like landen, willow, and drake.

Awww Draven I love u!

Hmmmm.... I wonder if Madison is Willows "twin"?

Well I must say this is much better done than insight, no proof/spelling issues so far. Really enjoying it, so far...

Why is it that everyone else seems to understand what's happening, I hate, hate, hate this cryptic over my head bullshit. This whole book is gonna make me feel dumb.

This book is so ridiculously confusing, I have no idea what is going on....ugh.

Wow Willow is just so weak this whole book, what happened to the girl from the previous 2 books?

It's in vain not "in vein"- correction again

Ya know, Willow is quite weak in this book. And what's with her only using Landen's power what happened to using hers instead of letting Landen do it all?

What fucking bullshit, this is just one massive mistake, and nothing can change that, at least now I know it was an intended error not a screw up by the author.

It is descendants do alyinna and guardian not ancestors, the are the descendants, correction for u there

PAGE 91 of embody ... to match HER sign to cancer..... suddenly I knew which one she was OLIVIA! Page. 95 of embody ... About Marc because he's a cancer. Honestly I'd rather teach DANE. DANE was not the cancer! If this is not fixed in the book immediately, I will be quitting this series and writing a strongly worded letter to the author letting her know to learn her fucking characters before writings a book.

Now wait just one freaking minute here, Dane and Marc were NOT the cancers, Olivia and Marc were, this is just bullshit, don't write a fucking book if you don't even remember who the characters were, and I will prove it!

REALLY?!?!?!?!

I really wish it wasn't called the looking glass.... Feels way to Alice in wonderland-y

Spacing issue on seconded to last paragraph.

" if the orbit signals the end of the trail" correction : trial.

" a **circler**couch centered the room" correction : circular

"A **circler** couch centered the room" correction : circular

"I could still **fill** the love for Marc...." Correction : feel

"That I barley heard him" umm barely again

Still sooooo slowwwwwww. Blahhhhhhh.......

"Was barley seven" correction : barely.

Ok already, get moving! It's sooooo slow again. :(

Edit possibly third paragraph: "-in the sane any ways " I do believe it is Anyways or possibly just Anyway.