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Veronica is 30% done with One by One
“I stepped over her body”- I don’t know, foreshadowing maybe? If I’m stepping over somebody I would just say I stepped over someone I wouldn’t say I stepped over their body unless I knew that they were dead. Again, another example of poor writing I stepped over so because they were laying on the floor, I stepped over a body a body sounds like they’re dead
Feb 17, 2025 12:31PM Add a comment
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Veronica
Veronica is 30% done with One by One
Shut She’s Not Breathing
She’s gone, she’s dead

No emotion- terrible narration of finding out a best friend has died

Narrator is not convincing- as much as I say I’m going to quit Frieda, her books are so quick and easy to read. Something I can put down and not have to remember much due to her surface writing—-twists that are more common to be predictable but,
Feb 17, 2025 10:56AM Add a comment
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In a reading slump
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Veronica
Veronica is on page 173 of 248 of The Hidden
Guard come to help Sophie and Elliot.
There’s a twist- a good one.
Online predators
Dec 31, 2024 05:36AM Add a comment
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Veronica
Veronica is on page 173 of 248 of The Hidden
She’s raped by DJ
He’s knocked her out as SA her
She tells Elliot-but the man came and found them.
Man gave key to her, tells her to hide it.
Tells her to stop talking
Back to house smelling of bleach and cleaner, Nick is gone.
Dec 30, 2024 09:35PM Add a comment
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Veronica
Veronica is on page 171 of 248 of The Hidden
Nicks not dead yet, breathing is shallow, and they run for the woods.
They escape to a home w a computer on the compound
Computer has letters DJ
Dec 30, 2024 09:29PM Add a comment
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Veronica is on page 169 of 248 of The Hidden
Cameras in house
Elliot looks pale, sick- she wants to make sure knife is in the box- why do they want him dead.
Sound at door- son comes in- where’s the dad?
Knife is missing. Did Elliott get similar message
Nicks hand behind back- apologizing, I have to kill Elliott. Dad sacrificed his own life by taking the pills. Elliot kills Nick
Dec 30, 2024 09:26PM Add a comment
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Veronica
Veronica is on page 164 of 248 of The Hidden
All cutlery changed to plàstic, pills in box as well.
She’s beginning that DJ had the same colored pills- what are the odds. Hoping her memory begins-
Now message in mirror- I can get you out of here- take the knife and kill Elliott once done you’re free to leave.
Dec 30, 2024 09:22PM Add a comment
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Veronica is on page 151 of 248 of The Hidden
She cuts her own hair- shared Jasmin saved her life. Elliot is asked about first time having sex. It was w her sister in law- is he her nephews father, the timing seems correct
Last question- was Elliot love of your life? No, she thinks it’s more about hormones. Strangers that care about each other.
In the box- clue, puzzles, snacks, and a large knife. What does it mean?
Dec 30, 2024 09:17PM Add a comment
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Veronica is on page 146 of 248 of The Hidden
Man body checks them for the key— Elliot hid the key. Trying to figure out why they are together-why put people together that care about each other.
Dec 30, 2024 09:10PM Add a comment
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Veronica is on page 141 of 248 of The Hidden
Flashback to date w DJ, a week later- he seems to good to be true
Dec 30, 2024 09:08PM Add a comment
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Veronica is on page 141 of 248 of The Hidden
The man and son turn them in- Elliot takes blame and gets pistol whipped. Sophie is furious- but the man and son only have 1 more day on their timer. Both are cuffed, placed in a car- taken to house #5
Dec 30, 2024 09:06PM Add a comment
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Veronica is on page 139 of 248 of The Hidden
Really, go back to the house???they go back but things seem different inside. Clock is counting down. Now other men are there- they are in the wrong house. Same situation, different house. The man comes back- but they sneak in to a room to hide.
Dec 30, 2024 09:02PM Add a comment
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Veronica
Veronica is on page 138 of 248 of The Hidden
Walked a path, pulled them into a circle- they are exhausted, each path keeps bringing them back
Then a new path finally leads them away, only to a guarded gate - w a man and a gun
Dec 30, 2024 08:58PM Add a comment
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Veronica is on page 129 of 248 of The Hidden
The keys- they get out
House w cottage- still only trees, house in midst of the woods. Run toward he trees, world is silent among them. Dirty paths, can’t hear cars, can’t hear anything.
Dec 30, 2024 08:54PM Add a comment
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Veronica is on page 126 of 248 of The Hidden
One week before- date night to meet DJ-

Man comes back- gestures him to grab trash, man has gun, man does it- plan didn’t work- but Elliot grabbed the keys.
Dec 30, 2024 08:53PM Add a comment
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Veronica is on page 120 of 248 of The Hidden
Before- 2 weeks ago-
Jas and Sophie are only friends, dating others. Sophie back to dating men.
She has a plan- take the man’s keys, get out the door. Still showering- now Elliot’s back- he’s saying he woke up and she was gone. She thinks she may be dreaming.
Dec 30, 2024 08:49PM Add a comment
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Veronica is on page 90 of 248 of The Hidden
Would you really take a shower when locked in a strange place and don’t know what’s going on- guard down too much?
Elliot is now missing, gone, empty and alone again.
Dec 30, 2024 08:42PM Add a comment
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Veronica
Veronica is on page 80 of 248 of The Hidden
Jasmin and her have crossed the line, birthday present led to a long kiss and a night in bed together.
Dec 30, 2024 08:40PM Add a comment
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Veronica is on page 70 of 248 of The Hidden
Chapter 7- Elliot is mad- doesn’t believe her.
There’s a countdown and he comes to bring items
They try other ways to get out. Why were they brought together- Elliot broke her heart years ago, why were they there. Who is doing this? Can’t be coincidence.
And the man comes in, with a gun.
Box w platters of food and leaves
Dec 30, 2024 08:34PM Add a comment
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Veronica
Veronica is on page 70 of 248 of The Hidden
Chapter 6- apartment looks reached- flashback
Are roommates tied up???
Just messy apartment- indie and Jasmin broke up, indie made the mess moving out.
Dec 30, 2024 08:29PM Add a comment
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Veronica is on page 70 of 248 of The Hidden
A man comes in- he knows her she knows him, Elliott. Now both locked in the house- they both don’t know what’s going on. They haven’t seen each other in 7 1/2 yrs. He doesn’t believe her- he tried to leave
Dec 30, 2024 08:27PM Add a comment
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Veronica
Veronica is on page 60 of 248 of The Hidden
Seven years before- doesn’t seem like she has friends or family. Jasmin visiting her again at the hospital.

Nurse didn’t seem to know Jasmin although she’s a the grandma-

Back in the lock-in- she won’t eat, although food was left for her. She keeps referring to Jasmin as the person to save her.

Plans to hurt her man when he returns

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Dec 30, 2024 08:27PM Add a comment
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Veronica is on page 56 of 248 of The Hidden
People come in, looks like a ninja, cardboard box is presented. She has a knife but doesn’t do anything, puts the knife down. He’s there to help her- eat and rest. Ru s to stab him but the blade can’t penetrate his clothing- the man leaves
Dec 30, 2024 08:21PM Add a comment
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Veronica
Veronica is on page 46 of 248 of The Hidden
Sophie and Jasmin meet- due to the incorrect hospital room, Jasmin looking for her grandma.
Back to being locked in- panic seems to have set in. She’s tied into Jasmin- hospital was flashback. Blurry mess of a memory- doesn’t remember being at work, what happened the night before.
Dec 30, 2024 08:19PM Add a comment
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Veronica
Veronica is on page 32 of 248 of The Hidden
Locked in? How does she get out- does she really think she can breakout?
Dec 30, 2024 08:15PM Add a comment
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Veronica
Veronica is on page 23 of 248 of The Hidden
Windows with only trees, no houses, no roads—- why was she locked in?
Dec 30, 2024 08:14PM Add a comment
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Veronica
Veronica is starting The Hidden
Waking up in an unfamiliar place, no one there, no purse or phone- clean place but how does she leave—- when she’s locked in?
Dec 30, 2024 08:12PM Add a comment
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Veronica
Veronica is starting The Butcher and the Wren (Dr. Wren Muller, #1)
Male and female telling the story between the butcher (male) and forensic pathologist Wren. Very gory from the start as an investigation begins of Jane Doe- but the author draws the scenes and pictures in the readers mind so precisely.
Nov 14, 2024 03:23PM Add a comment
The Butcher and the Wren (Dr. Wren Muller, #1)

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