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Veronica
is 30% done
“I stepped over her body”- I don’t know, foreshadowing maybe? If I’m stepping over somebody I would just say I stepped over someone I wouldn’t say I stepped over their body unless I knew that they were dead. Again, another example of poor writing I stepped over so because they were laying on the floor, I stepped over a body a body sounds like they’re dead
— Feb 17, 2025 12:31PM
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Veronica
is 30% done
Shut She’s Not Breathing
She’s gone, she’s dead
No emotion- terrible narration of finding out a best friend has died
Narrator is not convincing- as much as I say I’m going to quit Frieda, her books are so quick and easy to read. Something I can put down and not have to remember much due to her surface writing—-twists that are more common to be predictable but,
— Feb 17, 2025 10:56AM
She’s gone, she’s dead
No emotion- terrible narration of finding out a best friend has died
Narrator is not convincing- as much as I say I’m going to quit Frieda, her books are so quick and easy to read. Something I can put down and not have to remember much due to her surface writing—-twists that are more common to be predictable but,
